well this was supposed to be for Vv’s hundred word challenge (Voice), but of coarse I finished only about an hour after the deadline. but after all that hard work, I’ll be damned if i don’t let SOMEONE admire my work. so here it is. tell me what you think.

He seemed so sad. I couldn’t see his face, but I knew. I could hear it in his voice. He hadn’t sounded this way since…

I abandoned that thought. No need to relive that now. I gently touched the inside of his elbow, succeeding in ceasing both his words and his feet. I let my fingers trail down the length of his forearm pausing sadly at the scars on his wrist before pushing my fingers in between his, intertwining them. He looked at me, the barest hint of a smile touching his lips, before picking up the briefly forgotten conversation.

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3 Responses
  1. nana says:

    very nice, missie. Sorry you missed the deadline, but glad you wrote! Keep writing. That novel inside you and the one inside your mama are what will keep me in my old(er) age. :)

  2. Your Nana made sure your post still got shared. Glad she did, this was a touching piece.

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